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authorBjørn Forsman <bjorn.forsman@gmail.com>2014-08-24 16:21:08 +0200
committerBjørn Forsman <bjorn.forsman@gmail.com>2014-08-24 22:31:37 +0200
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Fix many package descriptions
(My OCD kicked in today...)

Remove repeated package names, capitalize first word, remove trailing
periods and move overlong descriptions to longDescription.

I also simplified some descriptions as well, when they were particularly
long or technical, often based on Arch Linux' package descriptions.

I've tried to stay away from generated expressions (and I think I
succeeded).

Some specifics worth mentioning:
 * cron, has "Vixie Cron" in its description. The "Vixie" part is not
   mentioned anywhere else. I kept it in a parenthesis at the end of the
   description.

 * ctags description started with "Exuberant Ctags ...", and the
   "exuberant" part is not mentioned elsewhere. Kept it in a parenthesis
   at the end of description.

 * nix has the description "The Nix Deployment System". Since that
   doesn't really say much what it is/does (especially after removing
   the package name!), I changed that to "Powerful package manager that
   makes package management reliable and reproducible" (borrowed from
   nixos.org).

 * Tons of "GNU Foo, Foo is a [the important bits]" descriptions
   is changed to just [the important bits]. If the package name doesn't
   contain GNU I don't think it's needed to say it in the description
   either.
Diffstat (limited to 'pkgs/tools/networking')
-rw-r--r--pkgs/tools/networking/cntlm/default.nix2
-rw-r--r--pkgs/tools/networking/connman/default.nix2
-rw-r--r--pkgs/tools/networking/flvstreamer/default.nix2
-rw-r--r--pkgs/tools/networking/host/default.nix2
-rw-r--r--pkgs/tools/networking/inetutils/default.nix2
-rw-r--r--pkgs/tools/networking/jnettop/default.nix2
-rw-r--r--pkgs/tools/networking/lsh/default.nix2
-rwxr-xr-xpkgs/tools/networking/mailutils/default.nix2
-rw-r--r--pkgs/tools/networking/minidlna/default.nix2
-rw-r--r--pkgs/tools/networking/tcpdump/default.nix2
-rw-r--r--pkgs/tools/networking/wget/default.nix2
11 files changed, 11 insertions, 11 deletions
diff --git a/pkgs/tools/networking/cntlm/default.nix b/pkgs/tools/networking/cntlm/default.nix
index cd3ae12a11b..f890bdddb69 100644
--- a/pkgs/tools/networking/cntlm/default.nix
+++ b/pkgs/tools/networking/cntlm/default.nix
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ stdenv.mkDerivation {
   '';
 
   meta = {
-    description = "Cntlm is an NTLM/NTLMv2 authenticating HTTP proxy";
+    description = "NTLM/NTLMv2 authenticating HTTP proxy";
     homepage = http://cntlm.sourceforge.net/;
     license = stdenv.lib.licenses.gpl2;
     maintainers = [ stdenv.lib.maintainers.qknight ];
diff --git a/pkgs/tools/networking/connman/default.nix b/pkgs/tools/networking/connman/default.nix
index c99af220a56..7d955b44950 100644
--- a/pkgs/tools/networking/connman/default.nix
+++ b/pkgs/tools/networking/connman/default.nix
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ stdenv.mkDerivation {
   '';
 
   meta = {
-    description = "The ConnMan project provides a daemon for managing internet connections";
+    description = "Provides a daemon for managing internet connections";
     homepage = "https://connman.net/";
     maintainers = [ stdenv.lib.maintainers.matejc ];
     # tested only on linux, might work on others also
diff --git a/pkgs/tools/networking/flvstreamer/default.nix b/pkgs/tools/networking/flvstreamer/default.nix
index f9322129612..ab8e14fddd0 100644
--- a/pkgs/tools/networking/flvstreamer/default.nix
+++ b/pkgs/tools/networking/flvstreamer/default.nix
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ stdenv.mkDerivation rec {
   '';
 
   meta = {
-    description = "flvstreamer is an command-line RTMP client";
+    description = "Command-line RTMP client";
 
     longDescription =
       '' flvstreamer is an open source command-line RTMP client intended to 
diff --git a/pkgs/tools/networking/host/default.nix b/pkgs/tools/networking/host/default.nix
index c74dbe52829..54cb8b21aaf 100644
--- a/pkgs/tools/networking/host/default.nix
+++ b/pkgs/tools/networking/host/default.nix
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ let version = "20000331"; in
     installTargets = "install man";
 
     meta = {
-      description = "`host', a DNS resolution utility";
+      description = "DNS resolution utility";
       license = "BSD-style";
     };
   }
diff --git a/pkgs/tools/networking/inetutils/default.nix b/pkgs/tools/networking/inetutils/default.nix
index 20ee6da8a30..a6a921f6f58 100644
--- a/pkgs/tools/networking/inetutils/default.nix
+++ b/pkgs/tools/networking/inetutils/default.nix
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ stdenv.mkDerivation rec {
   '';
 
   meta = {
-    description = "GNU Inetutils, a collection of common network programs";
+    description = "Collection of common network programs";
 
     longDescription =
       '' The GNU network utilities suite provides the
diff --git a/pkgs/tools/networking/jnettop/default.nix b/pkgs/tools/networking/jnettop/default.nix
index 49753d189d6..cfeaf47fdf2 100644
--- a/pkgs/tools/networking/jnettop/default.nix
+++ b/pkgs/tools/networking/jnettop/default.nix
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ stdenv.mkDerivation rec {
   preConfigure = '' autoconf '';
 
   meta = {
-    description = "Jnettop, a network traffic visualizer";
+    description = "Network traffic visualizer";
 
     longDescription = ''
       Jnettop is a traffic visualiser, which captures traffic going
diff --git a/pkgs/tools/networking/lsh/default.nix b/pkgs/tools/networking/lsh/default.nix
index 6be4119469e..c86dba91f5e 100644
--- a/pkgs/tools/networking/lsh/default.nix
+++ b/pkgs/tools/networking/lsh/default.nix
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ stdenv.mkDerivation rec {
   buildInputs = [ gperf guile gmp zlib liboop readline gnum4 pam ];
 
   meta = {
-    description = "GNU lsh, a GPL'd implementation of the SSH protocol";
+    description = "GPL'd implementation of the SSH protocol";
 
     longDescription = ''
       lsh is a free implementation (in the GNU sense) of the ssh
diff --git a/pkgs/tools/networking/mailutils/default.nix b/pkgs/tools/networking/mailutils/default.nix
index 4c1001310ae..0ee49032704 100755
--- a/pkgs/tools/networking/mailutils/default.nix
+++ b/pkgs/tools/networking/mailutils/default.nix
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ stdenv.mkDerivation rec {
   doCheck = false;
 
   meta = {
-    description = "GNU Mailutils is a rich and powerful protocol-independent mail framework";
+    description = "Rich and powerful protocol-independent mail framework";
 
     longDescription = ''
       GNU Mailutils is a rich and powerful protocol-independent mail
diff --git a/pkgs/tools/networking/minidlna/default.nix b/pkgs/tools/networking/minidlna/default.nix
index 02013d8ede6..9db42f09d81 100644
--- a/pkgs/tools/networking/minidlna/default.nix
+++ b/pkgs/tools/networking/minidlna/default.nix
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ stdenv.mkDerivation rec {
   buildInputs = [ ffmpeg flac libvorbis libogg libid3tag libexif libjpeg sqlite ];
 
   meta = {
-    description = "MiniDLNA Media Server";
+    description = "Media server software";
     longDescription = ''
       MiniDLNA (aka ReadyDLNA) is server software with the aim of being fully
       compliant with DLNA/UPnP-AV clients.
diff --git a/pkgs/tools/networking/tcpdump/default.nix b/pkgs/tools/networking/tcpdump/default.nix
index 2e27c2b2dc3..ed295e95a38 100644
--- a/pkgs/tools/networking/tcpdump/default.nix
+++ b/pkgs/tools/networking/tcpdump/default.nix
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ stdenv.mkDerivation rec {
   };
 
   meta = {
-    description = "tcpdump, a famous network sniffer";
+    description = "Network sniffer";
     homepage = http://www.tcpdump.org/;
     license = "BSD-style";
     maintainers = stdenv.lib.maintainers.mornfall;
diff --git a/pkgs/tools/networking/wget/default.nix b/pkgs/tools/networking/wget/default.nix
index 6ff5439c4bc..27d7fe2572a 100644
--- a/pkgs/tools/networking/wget/default.nix
+++ b/pkgs/tools/networking/wget/default.nix
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ stdenv.mkDerivation rec {
   doCheck = (perl != null);
 
   meta = {
-    description = "GNU Wget, a tool for retrieving files using HTTP, HTTPS, and FTP";
+    description = "Tool for retrieving files using HTTP, HTTPS, and FTP";
 
     longDescription =
       '' GNU Wget is a free software package for retrieving files using HTTP,