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| author | Bjørn Forsman <bjorn.forsman@gmail.com> | 2014-08-24 16:21:08 +0200 |
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| committer | Bjørn Forsman <bjorn.forsman@gmail.com> | 2014-08-24 22:31:37 +0200 |
| commit | c9baba9212feb6e39151118647d45b34b029a6df (patch) | |
| tree | 48dc0df228a071cc5639fe51bfce55d621a3a8f1 /pkgs/games/opentyrian | |
| parent | 2a6c7e2874a3ada9b1c544db61402e03091556db (diff) | |
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Fix many package descriptions
(My OCD kicked in today...) Remove repeated package names, capitalize first word, remove trailing periods and move overlong descriptions to longDescription. I also simplified some descriptions as well, when they were particularly long or technical, often based on Arch Linux' package descriptions. I've tried to stay away from generated expressions (and I think I succeeded). Some specifics worth mentioning: * cron, has "Vixie Cron" in its description. The "Vixie" part is not mentioned anywhere else. I kept it in a parenthesis at the end of the description. * ctags description started with "Exuberant Ctags ...", and the "exuberant" part is not mentioned elsewhere. Kept it in a parenthesis at the end of description. * nix has the description "The Nix Deployment System". Since that doesn't really say much what it is/does (especially after removing the package name!), I changed that to "Powerful package manager that makes package management reliable and reproducible" (borrowed from nixos.org). * Tons of "GNU Foo, Foo is a [the important bits]" descriptions is changed to just [the important bits]. If the package name doesn't contain GNU I don't think it's needed to say it in the description either.
Diffstat (limited to 'pkgs/games/opentyrian')
| -rw-r--r-- | pkgs/games/opentyrian/default.nix | 2 |
1 files changed, 1 insertions, 1 deletions
diff --git a/pkgs/games/opentyrian/default.nix b/pkgs/games/opentyrian/default.nix index cfae6a4bb3e..c435bbe5887 100644 --- a/pkgs/games/opentyrian/default.nix +++ b/pkgs/games/opentyrian/default.nix @@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ stdenv.mkDerivation rec { "; meta = { - description = ''OpenTyrian is an open source port of the game "Tyrian".''; + description = ''Open source port of the game "Tyrian"''; homepage = https://opentyrian.googlecode.com/; # This does not account of Tyrian data. # license = stdenv.lib.licenses.gpl2; |