Merge master into staging-next

12 files changed, 13 insertions, 13 deletions

diff --git a/nixos/doc/manual/configuration/declarative-packages.section.md b/nixos/doc/manual/configuration/declarative-packages.section.md
index 02eaa56192e..480e250da8c 100644
--- a/nixos/doc/manual/configuration/declarative-packages.section.md
+++ b/nixos/doc/manual/configuration/declarative-packages.section.md
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ Note: the `nixos` prefix tells us that we want to get the package from
 the `nixos` channel and works only in CLI tools. In declarative
 configuration use `pkgs` prefix (variable).
 
-To "uninstall" a package, simply remove it from
+To "uninstall" a package, remove it from
 [](#opt-environment.systemPackages) and run `nixos-rebuild switch`.
 
 ```{=include=} sections
diff --git a/nixos/doc/manual/configuration/modularity.section.md b/nixos/doc/manual/configuration/modularity.section.md
index 2eff1538798..f4a566d6697 100644
--- a/nixos/doc/manual/configuration/modularity.section.md
+++ b/nixos/doc/manual/configuration/modularity.section.md
@@ -36,8 +36,8 @@ Here, we include two modules from the same directory, `vpn.nix` and
 Note that both `configuration.nix` and `kde.nix` define the option
 [](#opt-environment.systemPackages). When multiple modules define an
 option, NixOS will try to *merge* the definitions. In the case of
-[](#opt-environment.systemPackages), that's easy: the lists of
-packages can simply be concatenated. The value in `configuration.nix` is
+[](#opt-environment.systemPackages) the lists of packages will be
+concatenated. The value in `configuration.nix` is
 merged last, so for list-type options, it will appear at the end of the
 merged list. If you want it to appear first, you can use `mkBefore`:
 
diff --git a/nixos/doc/manual/configuration/xfce.chapter.md b/nixos/doc/manual/configuration/xfce.chapter.md
index a80be2b523e..9ec4a51d6e3 100644
--- a/nixos/doc/manual/configuration/xfce.chapter.md
+++ b/nixos/doc/manual/configuration/xfce.chapter.md
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ manually (system wide), put them into your
 
 Thunar (the Xfce file manager) is automatically enabled when Xfce is
 enabled. To enable Thunar without enabling Xfce, use the configuration
-option [](#opt-programs.thunar.enable) instead of simply adding
+option [](#opt-programs.thunar.enable) instead of adding
 `pkgs.xfce.thunar` to [](#opt-environment.systemPackages).
 
 If you'd like to add extra plugins to Thunar, add them to
diff --git a/nixos/doc/manual/development/writing-documentation.chapter.md b/nixos/doc/manual/development/writing-documentation.chapter.md
index 8cb6823d098..c07a2618c07 100644
--- a/nixos/doc/manual/development/writing-documentation.chapter.md
+++ b/nixos/doc/manual/development/writing-documentation.chapter.md
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ pandoc -f markdown_github -t docbook5 docs.md -o my-section.md
 Pandoc can also quickly convert a single `section.xml` to HTML, which is
 helpful when drafting.
 
-Sometimes writing valid DocBook is simply too difficult. In this case,
+Sometimes writing valid DocBook is too difficult. In this case,
 submit your documentation updates in a [GitHub
 Issue](https://github.com/NixOS/nixpkgs/issues/new) and someone will
 handle the conversion to XML for you.
diff --git a/nixos/doc/manual/installation/installing-pxe.section.md b/nixos/doc/manual/installation/installing-pxe.section.md
index 4fbd6525f8c..c1cad99d39f 100644
--- a/nixos/doc/manual/installation/installing-pxe.section.md
+++ b/nixos/doc/manual/installation/installing-pxe.section.md
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Advanced users may wish to install NixOS using an existing PXE or iPXE
 setup.
 
 These instructions assume that you have an existing PXE or iPXE
-infrastructure and simply want to add the NixOS installer as another
+infrastructure and want to add the NixOS installer as another
 option. To build the necessary files from your current version of nixpkgs,
 you can run:
 
diff --git a/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-1609.section.md b/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-1609.section.md
index ad3478d0ca1..0cbabf58ca0 100644
--- a/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-1609.section.md
+++ b/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-1609.section.md
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ When upgrading from a previous release, please be aware of the following incompa
 
 Other notable improvements:
 
-- Revamped grsecurity/PaX support. There is now only a single general-purpose distribution kernel and the configuration interface has been streamlined. Desktop users should be able to simply set
+- Revamped grsecurity/PaX support. There is now only a single general-purpose distribution kernel and the configuration interface has been streamlined. Desktop users should be able to set
 
   ```nix
   {
diff --git a/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-1909.section.md b/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-1909.section.md
index 22cef05d4fa..2bd04f8dd40 100644
--- a/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-1909.section.md
+++ b/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-1909.section.md
@@ -198,7 +198,7 @@ When upgrading from a previous release, please be aware of the following incompa
 
   For nginx, the dependencies are still automatically managed when `services.nginx.virtualhosts.<name>.enableACME` is enabled just like before. What changed is that nginx now directly depends on the specific certificates that it needs, instead of depending on the catch-all `acme-certificates.target`. This target unit was also removed from the codebase. This will mean nginx will no longer depend on certificates it isn't explicitly managing and fixes a bug with certificate renewal ordering racing with nginx restarting which could lead to nginx getting in a broken state as described at [NixOS/nixpkgs\#60180](https://github.com/NixOS/nixpkgs/issues/60180).
 
-- The old deprecated `emacs` package sets have been dropped. What used to be called `emacsPackagesNg` is now simply called `emacsPackages`.
+- The old deprecated `emacs` package sets have been dropped. What used to be called `emacsPackagesNg` is now called `emacsPackages`.
 
 - `services.xserver.desktopManager.xterm` is now disabled by default if `stateVersion` is 19.09 or higher. Previously the xterm desktopManager was enabled when xserver was enabled, but it isn't useful for all people so it didn't make sense to have any desktopManager enabled default.
 
diff --git a/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-2003.section.md b/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-2003.section.md
index 76cee8858e8..695f8a2c95c 100644
--- a/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-2003.section.md
+++ b/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-2003.section.md
@@ -482,7 +482,7 @@ When upgrading from a previous release, please be aware of the following incompa
 
   - If you use `postgresql` on a different server, you don't need to change anything as well since this module was never designed to configure remote databases.
 
-  - If you use `postgresql` and configured your synapse initially on `19.09` or older, you simply need to enable postgresql-support explicitly:
+  - If you use `postgresql` and configured your synapse initially on `19.09` or older, you need to enable postgresql-support explicitly:
 
     ```nix
     { ... }: {
diff --git a/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-2009.section.md b/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-2009.section.md
index 6bb75a04b3e..eac02a8ff44 100644
--- a/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-2009.section.md
+++ b/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-2009.section.md
@@ -422,7 +422,7 @@ When upgrading from a previous release, please be aware of the following incompa
 
 - The `systemd-networkd` option `systemd.network.networks._name_.dhcpConfig` has been renamed to [systemd.network.networks._name_.dhcpV4Config](options.html#opt-systemd.network.networks._name_.dhcpV4Config) following upstream systemd's documentation change. See systemd.network 5 for details.
 
-- In the `picom` module, several options that accepted floating point numbers encoded as strings (for example [services.picom.activeOpacity](options.html#opt-services.picom.activeOpacity)) have been changed to the (relatively) new native `float` type. To migrate your configuration simply remove the quotes around the numbers.
+- In the `picom` module, several options that accepted floating point numbers encoded as strings (for example [services.picom.activeOpacity](options.html#opt-services.picom.activeOpacity)) have been changed to the (relatively) new native `float` type. To migrate your configuration remove the quotes around the numbers.
 
 - When using `buildBazelPackage` from Nixpkgs, `flat` hash mode is now used for dependencies instead of `recursive`. This is to better allow using hashed mirrors where needed. As a result, these hashes will have changed.
 
diff --git a/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-2211.section.md b/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-2211.section.md
index 37079c20967..1c73d0c9790 100644
--- a/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-2211.section.md
+++ b/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-2211.section.md
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ In addition to numerous new and upgraded packages, this release includes the fol
   - Support for algorithms that `libxcrypt` [does not consider strong](https://github.com/besser82/libxcrypt/blob/v4.4.28/lib/hashes.conf#L41) are **deprecated** as of this release, and will be removed in NixOS 23.05.
   - This includes system login passwords. Given this, we **strongly encourage** all users to update their system passwords, as you will be unable to login if password hashes are not migrated by the time their support is removed.
     - When using `users.users.<name>.hashedPassword` to configure user passwords, run `mkpasswd`, and use the yescrypt hash that is provided as the new value.
-    - On the other hand, for interactively configured user passwords, simply re-set the passwords for all users with `passwd`.
+    - On the other hand, for interactively configured user passwords, re-set the passwords for all users with `passwd`.
     - This release introduces warnings for the use of deprecated hash algorithms for both methods of configuring passwords. To make sure you migrated correctly, run `nixos-rebuild switch`.
 
 - The NixOS documentation is now generated from markdown. While docbook is still part of the documentation build process, it's a big step towards the full migration.
diff --git a/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-2305.section.md b/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-2305.section.md
index 3d27d3fef8f..0b54b8b32a3 100644
--- a/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-2305.section.md
+++ b/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-2305.section.md
@@ -611,7 +611,7 @@ If you are:
 - adding new rules with `*.rules`
 - running custom PulseAudio commands with `pulse.cmd`
 
-Simply move the definitions into the drop-in.
+Move the definitions into the drop-in.
 
 Note that the use of `context.exec` is not recommended and other methods of running your thing are likely a better option.
 
diff --git a/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-2311.section.md b/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-2311.section.md
index 8fa8fb5e594..e04c63029f9 100644
--- a/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-2311.section.md
+++ b/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-2311.section.md
@@ -316,7 +316,7 @@
 
 - Emacs macport version 29 was introduced.
 
-- The option `services.networking.networkmanager.enableFccUnlock` was removed in favor of `networking.networkmanager.fccUnlockScripts`, which allows specifying unlock scripts explicitly. The previous option simply did enable all unlock scripts bundled with ModemManager, which is risky, and didn't allow using vendor-provided unlock scripts at all.
+- The option `services.networking.networkmanager.enableFccUnlock` was removed in favor of `networking.networkmanager.fccUnlockScripts`, which allows specifying unlock scripts explicitly. The previous option enabled all unlock scripts bundled with ModemManager, which is risky, and didn't allow using vendor-provided unlock scripts at all.
 
 - The `html-proofer` package has been updated from major version 3 to major version 5, which includes [breaking changes](https://github.com/gjtorikian/html-proofer/blob/v5.0.8/UPGRADING.md).