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authorArnout Engelen <arnout@bzzt.net>2023-11-09 21:48:05 +0100
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doc: avoid 'simply' (#266434)
While the word 'simply' is usually added to encourage readers, it often has the
opposite effect and may even appear condescending, especially when the reader
runs into trouble trying to apply the suggestions from the documentation. It is
almost always an improvement to simply drop the word from the sentence.

(there are more possible improvements like this, we can apply those in separate
PRs)
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@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ When upgrading from a previous release, please be aware of the following incompa
 
 Other notable improvements:
 
-- Revamped grsecurity/PaX support. There is now only a single general-purpose distribution kernel and the configuration interface has been streamlined. Desktop users should be able to simply set
+- Revamped grsecurity/PaX support. There is now only a single general-purpose distribution kernel and the configuration interface has been streamlined. Desktop users should be able to set
 
   ```nix
   {