From af92f1c0cc2d83361771f7b3f6612219ffca5b3c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Tom Bereknyei <tomberek@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 29 Nov 2021 03:27:50 -0500
Subject: [21.11] update README.md

[21.11] update upgrading

[21.11] update release date

run generation
---
 .../manual/from_md/release-notes/rl-2111.section.xml   | 18 +++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

(limited to 'nixos/doc/manual/from_md/release-notes/rl-2111.section.xml')

diff --git a/nixos/doc/manual/from_md/release-notes/rl-2111.section.xml b/nixos/doc/manual/from_md/release-notes/rl-2111.section.xml
index f0e39471ece..1e430b94ae7 100644
--- a/nixos/doc/manual/from_md/release-notes/rl-2111.section.xml
+++ b/nixos/doc/manual/from_md/release-notes/rl-2111.section.xml
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <section xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" xml:id="sec-release-21.11">
-  <title>Release 21.11 (“Porcupine”, 2021.11/??)</title>
+  <title>Release 21.11 (“Porcupine”, 2021/11/30)</title>
   <para>
     In addition to numerous new and upgraded packages, this release has
     the following highlights:
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          kOps now defaults to 1.21.1, which uses containerd as the
+          kops now defaults to 1.21.1, which uses containerd as the
           default runtime.
         </para>
       </listitem>
@@ -84,13 +84,13 @@
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Activation scripts can now opt int to be run when running
-          <literal>nixos-rebuild dry-activate</literal> and detect the
-          dry activation by reading <literal>$NIXOS_ACTION</literal>.
-          This allows activation scripts to output what they would
-          change if the activation was really run. The users/modules
-          activation script supports this and outputs some of is
-          actions.
+          Activation scripts can now, optionally, be run during a
+          <literal>nixos-rebuild dry-activate</literal> and can detect
+          the dry activation by reading
+          <literal>$NIXOS_ACTION</literal>. This allows activation
+          scripts to output what they would change if the activation was
+          really run. The users/modules activation script supports this
+          and outputs some of is actions.
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
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